Myself
As a Student:-
Life
constantly revolves around education and knowledge. We are always learning and
grasping new concepts as we make our way through life. It has always been a top
priority of mine to maintain a high academic standard in school. However, life
has not always been uncomplicated. My journey from being a top of the class high
school graduate from Pakistan to being considered not up to par for college in
America, was one of the most difficult periods in my life.
I planned
on getting enrolled in a college as soon as possible, but upon further
perseverance I discovered that my diploma from Pakistan was considered
worthless in the United States. My alternatives were to get my GED or repeat
four years of high school. At this point, I was ready to pack my bags and head
back to Pakistan. I was too young to be on my own in Pakistan so my parents
decided to enroll my in high school.
It
was nothing what I had expected. My first day ended up in tears. I condemned
the way high schools functioned. I was often disgusted by the way students
disrespected their teachers. It was something I had never seen before, and I
was overwhelmed by it all. Despite all my pessimism, I continued going to
school. Two months has passed since I had started school yet my discontent and
grief continued to prevail. This caught the attention of my parents and my
guidance counselor. They tried their hardest to convince me to stay here. Soon
all my teachers got involved, mostly because I was extremely respectful towards
them and my grades were very high. They all had high hopes for me and they did
not want to see me fail.
My guidance counselor,
my teachers and my parents teamed up to set up a program which would accelerate
my time in graduating from high school. I began taking evening classes and
seeing myself succeeding in school, despite having a rigorous schedule helped
motivate me in staying and completing my high school education.
A year and a half
later, it was graduation day and I had finally gotten the reward of my hard
work and determination. My high school experience shaped my career path of
wanting to become a teacher. If I didn’t have the support of my teachers,
counselors and my parents, I doubt I would have stayed in America to complete
high school. I want to be able to help students who are in difficult situations
and need support and motivation to get them through the complicated times. I
was fortunate enough to have an amazing support system to keep me going,
whereas often students are not fortunate enough to have people encouraging them
to finish high school. A teacher is a highly influential person in a child’s
life, and I want to be able to provide students with the motivation and inspiration
in accomplishing their goals.
Hi Amnah,
ReplyDeleteYour story is really amazing. And well-written! There are some grammar issues, but you tell the story very well. I am so thankful to hear your parents and your school responded to your needs so well. What a momentous block you have overcome. I'm glad you are on your way to becoming a teacher.
Aside from a lot of verb tense switching and a just a couple of missing transition words, you have a good story here. You do still have some work to do on grammar, but you know how to tell a story. That matters--alot!
Glad to have you in class and I look forward to reading more of your writing.